Peace vs Ellroy

I blogged this a few years ago on my now defunct blog (one outstanding thing I’ve got is to try and reclaim that stuff and publish it here at the correct point in time), but this is a truly inspirational interview between two of my favourite authors and biggest inspirations, James Ellroy (LA Quartet and American Underground trilogy) being interviewed by David Peace (Red Riding Quartet):

http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/2010/jan/09/james-ellroy-david-peace-conversation?INTCMP=SRCH

This following section has been the biggest inspiration to me as a writer:

DP You alternate narratives from chapter to chapter. When you are writing the book, do you go from chapter to chapter; chapter one, two, three? Or do you follow one narrator all the way through and then go back?

JE No, I have a 400-page outline of the book: chapter one, two, three; viewpoint, viewpoint, viewpoint; Holly, Crutchfield, Tedrow. Holly, Crutchfield, Tedrow.

DP So even the outline is broken down into the separate chapters?

JE I start out where I have the research notes. I have pages of notes on character. Historical events. Soon things start coming together. And then I do a shorthand version of the entire story and then I flesh it out into a big outline. And the outline is just, Chapter one: Pete Bondurant / Beverley Hills Hotel / Watching Howard Hughes shoot dope / Following leads / Following information / Boom, boom, boom.

If you’ve never read Ellroy – and you should, start with the LA Quartet – you’ll see that his work is so densely written.  The section above is from the start of the COLD SIX THOUSAND, the first in the American Underworld trilogy.  That iterative approach that he mentions is how I work now – start with the big stuff, which you treat as islands, and then put bridges between the islands, then start looking at the maps of those islands and bridges, and then you start driving across the bridges and walking around the islands.  I’ve made huge mistakes with plotting in the past but that one paragraph, seeing how the master does it, has seriously helped me.

— Ed

Author: edjamesauthor

East Lothian-based writer of crime fiction novels. Published by Amazon Publishing's Thomas & Mercer imprint and self-published on Kindle.

6 thoughts

  1. I believe everyone has a book in them. Would never attempt it myself, not a good enough wordsmith, but this is great advice for someone thinking about it and wondering….”where the hell do I begin?”

    1. Definitely. The hardest part for me is learning to plot. Writing is the easy bit – trying to turn a 90,000 word oil tanker round is where you learn how important plotting is…

      That’s advice from the best guy in the business. Ellroy’s stuff is the best crime fiction I’ve ever read. Peace is good too, very much a British version.

      — Ed

  2. Thanks for that link. Ellroy is always great to hear/read on his writing methods. It doesn’t surprise me to see he would have a 400 page outline!! As so say so dense plot wise, but such writing!!

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